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Roses are red, Violets are blue
Doesn't that line just sound cheesy to you?

When I open my card, I hope to find
an original, sweet, more creative line.

All that you do, is scribble your name
at the end of a poem that's genuinely lame!

Tut...roses are red, violets are blue
Do I look bloody colour blind to you?!

You didn't even write it! It came with the card!
Poetry isn't exactly hard!

Sweetheart, I love you, really I do
But I coulnd't care less that violets are blue!

Couldn't you have made an effort this time?
Coz I'm getting real sick of reading that line!

Most girls love romance, well I do for sure!
Tu Peut même parler français pour proclamer ton amour!

That would be different! That would be sweet!
Come on baby, sweep a girl off her feet!

I'm not asking for much, just some more va va voom.
Love doesn't have to be shown in the bedroom!
A random Valentines day poem with a bit of humor and some little twists
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marleendekker Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014   Photographer
I Love it so much!
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you! Glad you like it!
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marleendekker Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014   Photographer
I do in fact love most of your poems. You are really good. 
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thank you! That means a lot to me :)
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CloisterBlackM Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is brilliant! Love it!
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you x
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This. Made. My. Day. Period.
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, thanks. This comment made mine. Period :P
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha :)
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MiikaC Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011   Writer
HA, I found it to be amusing, made me smile, thats for sure :)
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great news ^^ It was hard making a humorous poem :/
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MiikaC Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011   Writer
It's alwats been difficult for me : / oh well
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EmmyIsAZebra Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This piece was featured here --> [link] thank you so much for creating this! :heart:
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks alot ^^ x
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:iconlemonloving-goodgirl:
XDDDDDDDD Love this.
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THanks alot!
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:iconlemonloving-goodgirl:
No problem!
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AndyKimiko Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Reallly good!
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:iconth3-c0unt3ss:
Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! xx
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Espyfluff Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL, this one made me laugh. xD
Very cleverly written. :3
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thaks alot! xx
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contemporaryhart Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
:)...this is great! very playful yet mature....I love "tut"..:)
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ever so much! xx
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cloudelfinulr36 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, the eternal issue b/t a girl and her beau on Valentine's day.
Mine doesn't even buy me a card anymore.
Or say anything sweet. :(

I like this a lot.
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ever so much!

Really? Im sad to hear that :S Perhaps he doesn't feel the need to because you should already know that he loves you more than anything ^^ xx
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WongZixin Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student General Artist
I second =AnglaiseRox :XD:
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ^^
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OpenLocks Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011
:rofl: That's funny!

... Tho, now I'm imagining it done up like a Dr Seuss book, with all the illustrations - the meter is very similar. For some reason, that just makes it funnier for me :XD:
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! Im glad you found it funny!
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kellyrose95 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011
haha this made me luagh :XD: good job and keep up the good work :)
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THanks ever so much! That means alot to me! x
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kellyrose95 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
you're welcome! :)
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Student Writer
Great poem!! =) Love the humor and the rhyming! Awesome job!
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks alot! You're too kind :) x
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student Writer
Welcome!
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Fozzymillow Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Student General Artist
You should sell this to a store; I think a lot of people would buy a card like this.

Then again, that kinda removes the point ...
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOl! Thanks ever so much! Im glad you think its that good! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! x
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Oceanbird Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I like! It is fun and zips right off my tongue. Your Rhyming is smooth and fresh.
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! That means so much to me! x
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annamarie7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011
Very good! I liked it. Very sweet, true, and funny:)
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks alot! Thank you for taking the time to read my poem! x
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annamarie7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011
Your very welcome:) It was worth my time!! It was awesome
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, really! Thanks ever so much!
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annamarie7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011
YES:) Your so welcome
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mg1706 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
GREAT!!!
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THANKS! xxx
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spacezillazon Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I also agree good job for valentines day.
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Th3-C0unt3ss Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :) xxx
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spacezillazon Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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BLUEamnesiac Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a clever title and such a timely release for V-Day :-)
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